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Post by Washi Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:51 pm

Name: Ash Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Elements: Fire + Wind
CK usage: 4

Description: The user makes an ash clone of themselves by quickly blowing out ash. This replica is unable to use jutsu and is stationary. Once attacked, the clone explodes into white ash, possibly blocking the opponent's vision temporarily.

Name: Fire Release: Birds of Fire
Rank: D
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
CK usage: 3

Description: The user inhales air and blows out small balls of fire that resemble birds. A weaker version of Katon: Hosenka No Jutsu.

Name: Wind Release: Birds of Wind
Rank: D
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
CK usage: 3

Description: The user inhales air and blows out small balls of compressed wind that resemble birds. A weaker version of Fuuton: Washi No Jutsu.

Name: Ash Spread Technique
Rank: C
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
CK usage: 4

Description: The user inhales air and blows out a small cloud of hot ash. The ash is hot but does little damage to the opponent except hurting their eyes and lungs. This ash is able to become ignited but the cloud is only big enough to cover one person for a few seconds.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Ash Environment
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
CK usage: 5

Description: If the ash from the Ash Spread Technique is inhaled by the opponent, then the user is able to send them into a genjutsu. This genjutsu makes the opponent think that hot ash is falling from the air, the ash burns the opponent painfully if it touches them. This genjutsu does not transport the user to another world or place but instead places an illusion of falling ash inside the real world. The falling ash is slow but is mostly unavoidable unless there is shelter of some kind such as trees. (The ash will fall for three posts.)


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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:03 pm

Washi wrote:Name: Smoke Technique
Rank: C
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Elements: Fire + Wind

Description: The user inhales air and blows out a weak fire with the wind spreading its fumes and smoke - temporarily blocking the enemy's vision and irritating their eyes and lungs.

There are already jutsu like this out there. Sorry.

Washi wrote:
Name: Ash Spread Technique
Rank: D
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Fire

Description: The user inhales air and blows out a small cloud of hot ash. The ash is hot but does little damage to the opponent except hurting their eyes and lungs. This ash is able to become ignited but the cloud is only big enough to cover one person for a few seconds.


Mhm, I'd say that this should be a C rank.

The others are all really good.
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Post by Washi Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:28 pm

Well I fixed it and changed one of the jutsu.
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:33 pm

Okay, these are all accepted.

For CK usages:

Ash Clone Technique - 4 CK per clone

Fire Release: Birds of Fire/Wind Release: Birds of Wind - 3 CK

Ash Spread Technique - 4 CK

Demonic Illusion: Ash Environment - 5 CK
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Post by Blaize Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:35 pm

Name: Ash Spread Technique
Rank: C
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Fire

Description: The user inhales air and blows out a small cloud of hot ash. The ash is hot but does little damage to the opponent except hurting their eyes and lungs. This ash is able to become ignited but the cloud is only big enough to cover one person for a few seconds.

(Is there not a jutsu like that?)



Name: Demonic Illusion: Ash Environment
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu

Description: If the ash from the Ash Spread Technique is inhaled by the opponent, then the user is able to send them into a genjutsu. This genjutsu makes the opponent think that hot ash is falling from the air, the ash burns the opponent painfully if it touches them.[/b]

(If followed by the jutsu above should it not be of a higher ranking? And how is this Genjutsu Dispelled? How long will it last?)
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:39 pm

Blaize wrote:Name: Ash Spread Technique
Rank: C
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Fire

Description: The user inhales air and blows out a small cloud of hot ash. The ash is hot but does little damage to the opponent except hurting their eyes and lungs. This ash is able to become ignited but the cloud is only big enough to cover one person for a few seconds.

(Is there not a jutsu like that?)

No it's different. Slightly the same, but not really.

Blaize wrote:
Name: Demonic Illusion: Ash Environment
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu

Description: If the ash from the Ash Spread Technique is inhaled by the opponent, then the user is able to send them into a genjutsu. This genjutsu makes the opponent think that hot ash is falling from the air, the ash burns the opponent painfully if it touches them.[/b]

(If followed by the jutsu above should it not be of a higher ranking? And how is this Genjutsu Dispelled? How long will it last?)

I don't think that it needs to be a higher rank. I assumed that it was dispelled normally, but I forgot to ask about turns. You're right.

Washi-san how many turns is it active?
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Post by Blaize Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:40 pm

ok then. Just thingking
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:41 pm

Thank you! I wouldn't have noticed.
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Post by Washi Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:43 pm

Blaize wrote:Name: Ash Spread Technique
Rank: C
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Fire

Description: The user inhales air and blows out a small cloud of hot ash. The ash is hot but does little damage to the opponent except hurting their eyes and lungs. This ash is able to become ignited but the cloud is only big enough to cover one person for a few seconds.

(Is there not a jutsu like that?)



Name: Demonic Illusion: Ash Environment
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu

Description: If the ash from the Ash Spread Technique is inhaled by the opponent, then the user is able to send them into a genjutsu. This genjutsu makes the opponent think that hot ash is falling from the air, the ash burns the opponent painfully if it touches them.[/b]

(If followed by the jutsu above should it not be of a higher ranking? And how is this Genjutsu Dispelled? How long will it last?)

First point, it is actually a bit different from its canon relation:

Name: Katon: Haisekisho (Fire Release: Ash Product Burning)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: Unknown
Description:
Unlike other fire-based jutsu, this jutsu allows the user to breathe out a cloud of superheated ash capable of causing third-degree burns. Because it is ash and not flame, the ash remains in the air around the target, and therefore remains potent for a longer period.

Notice this technique has no rank and is also a lot stronger, it causes much more damage and the ash cloud stays around the target longer then the other technique.

As for the genjutsu, it is as easy to get out of as any other C-ranked genjutsu, I didn't think it was necessary to put that in. This isn't actually a genjutsu that transports the user to another world, instead it puts in illusions of falling ash.
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Post by Blaize Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:45 pm

Alright then. Is the Flame Flammable by other Fire? And since its partly a cloud if it was to be blown away by wind is that possible. Just these 2 querstions on my head Sorry for the randomness
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Post by Washi Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:49 pm

Yes to both, the ash is flammable to any other katons and can be blown away by wind jutsu of the same rank or above although the cloud only lasts for a few seconds in this technique anyway.

Also, I put in more description for the genjutsu.
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Post by Blaize Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:54 pm

Alrigh then...arghh i forgot what i was going to say
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Post by Washi Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:27 pm

Hmm Approved?
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:33 pm

Um... Yes.

1st approval.
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Post by Blaize Sat Sep 13, 2008 8:57 pm

2) approval
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