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Post by Sam4rmduval1 Fri Aug 22, 2008 9:07 am

Name:Lien Hyane

Age:10

Gender:F

Village: Leaf

Ninja Rank:Academy Student

Clan:Hyuuga (Trained and raised in Hyuuga clan but not originally from the clan)

Looks:Lien has a tomboyish body structure with a fair facial complextion she has long wavy dark blue hair with red highlights at the tips of her hair making it seem like her hair is on fire she about 100 pounds and is 5'10'' tall her eye color changes with her mood from red (when shes calm like a candle fire) to blue (when shes excited like the hottest part of the flame) her face normally have minor burn marks from her always training she wears black spandex shorts, a red long sleeved spandex shirt and gloves that shows no skin on her upper body except her neck. Lien has a pheonix tattooe on her back.
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Personality: Liens personality like her eyes changes, she can go from a warm, caring, loving person who will do everything in her power to help those she cares about to a merciless violent person who will do what ever it takes to destroy her enemies and those who make her mad. but one thing that can be said about both of her personalitys is that she is a hard worker who hates Failing wherher it be in Love or Hate

Special Characteristics:Lien Produces and releases heat based chakra throught her body similar to how the hyuuga clan pushes pure chakra throught their body as an offensive attack or defensive ability.Lien is also very speedy as she trains her speed the most.

Elements:Fire, lightning

Skills/Specialties: Lien is trained in taijutsu and ninjutsu and her clan her clan specializes in manipulaing heat (note* heat not fire) she is an excellent swordsmen and she skilled in ranged weponry and using explosives also she can infuse her heat chakra into her swords making it like a Light saber or into ranged weapons such as kunai to use to make explosions(note* after throwing bombs filled with Flammeble liquids that she creates in her free time that splash on the opponent she then uses the heated kunai to then blow up the target)

Jutsus:

Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei (Exploding Tag: Activate)
Type: Supplementary
Range: All Ranges
Rank: E
Description:
Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. The exploding tags that the Third Hokage used were different than the usual bomb tags, being yellow in color instead of white with a red border.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: E
Description:
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise, which Sasuke has done twice in the anime. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.
This technique is sometimes referred to as the Art of Projection ("Utsusemi no Jutsu") in other manga and anime series.


Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: E
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu.

More to come when customs get approved

bunshin no jutsu( basic clone Technique)
Type Supplementary
Range:mid
Rank E
Description The user Creates several clones of him/herself that disperse when hit



Equipment:
1 katana
20 custom made bombs
20 smoke bombs
30 kunai
50 shurikan
100 senbon needles
175 paper bombs
1 pair of gloves


History/Background Story: During a big conflict in the clan due to the fact where liens father and mother were supposed to have a Son and were told to kill thier daugher because it was meant for the next born child to be a boy and where the clan leader was about to assasinate her father for failing to kill her. Liens father sealed all of his power and his "Pride of The Pheonix" into her which created a pheonix shaped tattooe on her back which gives her immense heat power more than any other in her clan which she states she will use to avenge her father and destroy the one who killed him.... The clan leader
Liens mother took her and confided in Hiabi Hyuga,( Hanabi Hyuuga's Daughter) where Lien was raised and taught the ways of the hyuuga but her lack of the byakugan caused her to create her own version of the Gentle fist style fighting which she named the "Heat Style Gentle fist"
Lien has since become a genin of the leaf village and trains to become Hokage in hopes to being as strong as possible and because of her warm hearted persoality from her bieng cared for by her surrogate mother from the hyuuga clan and her intensity she has because of what happned to her father she believes she has the perfect qualities for the Hokage but this dream will not be accomplished until she gets revenge on her clan leader.


Roleplay Sample: Lien sat under a tree outside of the village examining her blade that her father left for her before he died reminiscing on her good times living with Hiabi and struggles she had to over come without having the byakugan lien smiled to her self " Im going to be the next hokage" lien quickly jumped up and held her blade ready to strike sensing that someone was there " Come out who ever you are i know youre there i can sense your body heat" "You a kage Hah yea right you will never be a kage u little weakling" the rouge came from his hiding place revealing his yellow hair and orangish jumpsuit "to save you the humiliation i suffered ill end your life here." the rouge shinobi began making a string of hand seals "Shadow Clone Jutsu" 4 clones came rushing at lien all with a blue spiraling sphere in there hands but before the hits connected a stunned lien a man with the nara symbol came stopped all the clones in thier tracks. It was the Hokage " shikimaru kage thank you for saving me" " lien go back to the village ill deal with him" lien dissapeared from view. and so did the Rouge ninja...


Last edited by Sam4rmduval1 on Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:54 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : custom jutsus)
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Post by Chieko Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:12 am

Looks good so far. First, I think you should add a little more in depth to your personality. Let your imagination throw details at you. Wink
Second, most of your jutsu's are custom so what I need you to do is bring them under the creation center. After they're approved, you can add them back to your character. Razz
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Post by Sam4rmduval1 Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:08 pm

Name:Lien Hyane

Age:10

Gender:F

Village: Leaf

Ninja Rank:Academy Student

Clan:Hyuuga (Trained and raised in Hyuuga clan but not originally from the clan)

Looks:Lien has a tomboyish body structure with a fair facial complextion she has long wavy dark blue hair with red highlights at the tips of her hair making it seem like her hair is on fire she about 100 pounds and is 5'10'' tall her eye color changes with her mood from red (when shes calm like a candle fire) to blue (when shes excited like the hottest part of the flame) her face normally have minor burn marks from her always training she wears black spandex shorts, a red long sleeved spandex shirt and gloves that shows no skin on her upper body except her neck. Lien has a pheonix tattooe on her back.
[b]Lien Hyane[/b] 8eed27

Personality: Liens personality like her eyes changes, she can go from a warm, caring, loving person who will do everything in her power to help those she cares about to a merciless violent person who will do what ever it takes to destroy her enemies and those who make her mad. but one thing that can be said about both of her personalitys is that she is a hard worker who hates Failing wherher it be in Love or Hate

Special Characteristics:Lien Produces and releases heat based chakra throught her body similar to how the hyuuga clan pushes pure chakra throught their body as an offensive attack or defensive ability.Lien is also very speedy as she trains her speed the most.

Elements:Fire, lightning

Skills/Specialties: Lien is trained in taijutsu and ninjutsu and her clan her clan specializes in manipulaing heat (note* heat not fire) she is an excellent swordsmen and she skilled in ranged weponry and using explosives also she can infuse her heat chakra into her swords making it like a Light saber or into ranged weapons such as kunai to use to make explosions(note* after throwing bombs filled with Flammeble liquids that she creates in her free time that splash on the opponent she then uses the heated kunai to then blow up the target)

Jutsus:

Heat Style Gentle fist
Rank : D
Type: Supplementary
Description: a jutsu used by the hayane clan mixed with her training of the gentle fist style Lien protrudes her heat chakra through her hands

Katon Kaiton no jutsu
Rank: D
Type Supplementary Long Range
Description: Lien Spins and releases her acess Heat chakra creating a weaker heat version of kaiton with immense heat that unlike the hyuugas kaiton it doesnt block projectile weapons and has a blind spot since she doesnt have the byakugan but it has a longer range and does alot of damage to any one caught in its radius.

Light Saber Jutsu
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary Short Range
Description: Lien Forces half of her heat chakra into her katana given to her by her father and turns it into a light Saber which can slice through mostly anything including some chakra infused shields and can cut through limbs without causing bleeding

Valcanic Eruption Jutsu
Rank: D
Type:medium range Offensive
Description: Lien Focuses Heat chakra through her feet and stomps her feet causing a blast of heat to come from the ground does medium damage(*note this jutsu will be upgraded as she ranks up)

Fiery Ground Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: long range Supplementary
Description:Lien puts her hand to the ground and uses a suffecient amount of heat chakra and causes the ground to be come very hot which can melt the opponents shoes or the ground or burn thier bare feet. this jutsu uses a great amount of Liens jutsu as she is only an academy student

Oil Bunshin no jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Description: Lien creates 2 bunshins made up of oil which turn into oil after bieng damaged like regular bunshins they are destroyed after impact and cannot use jutsu

Equipment:
1 katana
20 custom made bombs
20 smoke bombs
30 kunai
50 shurikan
100 senbon needles
175 paper bombs
1 pair of gloves


History/Background Story: During a big conflict in the clan due to the fact where liens father and mother were supposed to have a Son and were told to kill thier daugher because it was meant for the next born child to be a boy and where the clan leader was about to assasinate her father for failing to kill her. Liens father sealed all of his power and his "Pride of The Pheonix" into her which created a pheonix shaped tattooe on her back which gives her immense heat power more than any other in her clan which she states she will use to avenge her father and destroy the one who killed him.... The clan leader
Liens mother took her and confided in Hiabi Hyuga,( Hanabi Hyuuga's Daughter) where Lien was raised and taught the ways of the hyuuga but her lack of the byakugan caused her to create her own version of the Gentle fist style fighting which she named the "Heat Style Gentle fist"
Lien has since become a genin of the leaf village and trains to become Hokage in hopes to being as strong as possible and because of her warm hearted persoality from her bieng cared for by her surrogate mother from the hyuuga clan and her intensity she has because of what happned to her father she believes she has the perfect qualities for the Hokage but this dream will not be accomplished until she gets revenge on her clan leader.


Roleplay Sample: Lien sat under a tree outside of the village examining her blade that her father left for her before he died reminiscing on her good times living with Hiabi and struggles she had to over come without having the byakugan lien smiled to her self " Im going to be the next hokage" lien quickly jumped up and held her blade ready to strike sensing that someone was there " Come out who ever you are i know youre there i can sense your body heat" "You a kage Hah yea right you will never be a kage u little weakling" the rouge came from his hiding place revealing his yellow hair and orangish jumpsuit "to save you the humiliation i suffered ill end your life here." the rouge shinobi began making a string of hand seals "Shadow Clone Jutsu" 4 clones came rushing at lien all with a blue spiraling sphere in there hands but before the hits connected a stunned lien a man with the nara symbol came stopped all the clones in thier tracks. It was the Hokage " shikimaru kage thank you for saving me" " lien go back to the village ill deal with him" lien dissapeared from view. and so did the Rouge ninja...
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