The Naruto Way
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

obimaru sharingan

2 posters

Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty obimaru sharingan

Post by natki Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:23 pm

rank:s

name: obimaru sharingan

type: genjutsu/cancellation/copy/bloodline

info: it is the greatest sharingan ever but to learn it you must leave your village and every one you care about. once you look at the persons eyes you can go into a genjutsu that is deadly and it can cancel out jutsu as well as upload a jutsu to memory if you cancel it

roleplay example: natki was trapped in a demonic illusion so he uses the sharingan to cancel it and copy it


Last edited by natki on Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:29 pm; edited 3 times in total
natki
natki
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin

Posts : 85
Join date : 2008-08-16
Age : 29
Location : where you least expect it

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by Paksennarion Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:06 pm

Uh... Include rank... and please use a program with spell check so I know exactly what you're trying to say it does. At the moment I'm confused.
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Sand Genin
Sand Genin

Posts : 1715
Join date : 2008-08-22

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by natki Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:39 pm

forgive my crappy gramer but i fixed it
natki
natki
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin

Posts : 85
Join date : 2008-08-16
Age : 29
Location : where you least expect it

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by Paksennarion Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:47 pm

So... basically it can send people into Genjutsu just by looking at the person's eyes, it can cancel out Genjutsu if you're under one and it can copy a Genjutsu that you've been under if you canceled it before?

There are several issues with this. One you still haven't included a rank. Two you stated that it was the best Sharingan, so does that mean only Uchiha Clan members can use it?
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Sand Genin
Sand Genin

Posts : 1715
Join date : 2008-08-22

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by natki Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:22 pm

fixed it
natki
natki
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin

Posts : 85
Join date : 2008-08-16
Age : 29
Location : where you least expect it

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by Paksennarion Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:24 pm

There is no rank X on this site.

So, is it an Uchiha Clan jutsu?
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Sand Genin
Sand Genin

Posts : 1715
Join date : 2008-08-22

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by natki Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:29 pm

yes and umm then i will change it to s
natki
natki
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin

Posts : 85
Join date : 2008-08-16
Age : 29
Location : where you least expect it

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by Paksennarion Mon Aug 25, 2008 7:02 pm

Okay. So, just to make this clear. Are you allowed to return to people after gaining it? Or can you never be close to someone again?
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Sand Genin
Sand Genin

Posts : 1715
Join date : 2008-08-22

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by natki Mon Aug 25, 2008 7:10 pm

yes
natki
natki
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin

Posts : 85
Join date : 2008-08-16
Age : 29
Location : where you least expect it

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by Paksennarion Mon Aug 25, 2008 7:58 pm

Yes to which one?
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Sand Genin
Sand Genin

Posts : 1715
Join date : 2008-08-22

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by natki Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:16 pm

lol i love doing that you are alowed to meat people after that
natki
natki
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin

Posts : 85
Join date : 2008-08-16
Age : 29
Location : where you least expect it

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by Paksennarion Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:17 pm

Hm... I think that this jutsu needs a weakness. It's really really strong at the moment with no drawback since you only need to leave your precious people for a little bit.
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Sand Genin
Sand Genin

Posts : 1715
Join date : 2008-08-22

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by natki Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:19 pm

ok how about it permently takes away a portion of your chaucra every time you uses it?
natki
natki
Sand Jounin
Sand Jounin

Posts : 85
Join date : 2008-08-16
Age : 29
Location : where you least expect it

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by Paksennarion Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:22 pm

That works.

'Kay. I'll go add it to the scroll section. If you qualify to be able to use it, you need to first buy it and train with it.
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Sand Genin
Sand Genin

Posts : 1715
Join date : 2008-08-22

Back to top Go down

obimaru sharingan Empty Re: obimaru sharingan

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum