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Kokoyaki the Lobster

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Post by Matsutsu Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:23 am

Name:Kokoyaki
Age:Child.
Gender: M

Personality:Much like his father the Boss Lobster rigorous dangerous but this sometimes gets him into more trouble than good because he is kind of small. He is very headstrong and often rushes into battle along with its summoner. Very reliable doesn't leave during a fight without summoner's permission or very injured. Kokoyaki is also very arrogant and wants to take over as Boss Lobster when his fathers passes on.

Power: Seiikusume (One Claw grows bigger to about adolescent size for a short amount of time and begins to punch, jab, and cut) Can also shoot small quick jet mixed with saltwater and bubbles and only can be used as a distraction

Weakness: Afraid of Fire, also very vunerable to wind and fire. Slow moving and isn't strong enough to be a main source of damage.

Strength: the Seiikusume

Notes: Nearing Adolescent age in a month. (only my summon for another month)


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Post by Paksennarion Thu Aug 28, 2008 8:35 am

You need to include an actual weakness. As in something that can be used against it.

Also, if you can please include more detail.

On a random note, the salt water can only be a distraction. It does no damage whatsoever, 'Kay?
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Post by Matsutsu Thu Aug 28, 2008 11:16 am

*fixed
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Post by Paksennarion Thu Aug 28, 2008 1:03 pm

Accepted.
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