madara_of_darkness

[madara_of_darkness]

name:madara uchiha
Age: 13

Gender: Male

Village: Leaf village

Ninja Rank: academy student

Clan:none

element:wind/lightening

jutsu:



Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: E
Description:
This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).


history: hi my name is madara uchiha when i was born a wind/lightening dragon attacked the village so the kage sealed it inside a boy which is me

(uses kata on a dummy then uses shadow clones then fichts them)
(does hand signs to creat lightening)
(does hand signs to creat tornadoes)
(trows kunies at a tree)
(trains with my sword)
(uses my shadow clones then i go up to a water fall and try to cut the water with my wind

[Paksennarion]

It's okay so far. You need to add Academy Student to the rank. And also, please have an actual name. With a first name and a last name.

[Kiza Byarigan]

hushiba banshi
Rank:E
uses shadowclones to form a tornado does and signs and makes lightening hit it then does more hand signs and copacts it

Huh?

[Paksennarion]

It's a custom jutsu. I'm assuming.

You may only have two elements.

[Kiza Byarigan]

Custom Jutsu need to be accepted before being applied to your character. And Paks is right only two elements.

[Paksennarion]

Please post your custom jutsu in the Custom Center where is will be evaluated and possibly accepted.

[Paksennarion]

You also need to include an example of your roleplaying skill please.

Other than that, this looks fine to me.

[Paksennarion]

Um, well your roleplaying sample has to be at least 6 lines long.

[Blaize]

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