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Post by Hakai Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:32 am

Name:Dragon's fang

Type:Sword

Chakra usage of the ability is 3 per turn while using the sword.

Looks:The blade of the sword is 80 cm and the handlebar is 20cm making it exactly 1 meter.It is double edged and thin making it unpredicted weapon to a close ranged combat.

Description:The sword was made by Yorroichi's father that was once well known blacksmither.The secret of the metal he made that sword is still a secret to everyone,Yorroichi's father reffers to it as˝the masterpice˝.The blade is incredibly light but also incredibly strong,the sword is almost indestructible.The edge is very sharp,too sharp so the handeling with the sword must be very proffesional and carefull,cuz when you cut tree or even human flesh,you don't feel the need of strenght to cut through,it looks like the sword simply cuts himself.The sword is also good at piercing it oponents.Effectivness of the blade is that making combos that are very fast because even a single strike to the body can easily split it in two.It requires that the user is fast and agile being able to easly change positions and get close to the enemy before he even know's it.The secret of the blade lies in the small pathways where you can infuse chakra making the blade lighter but still the chakra protects the blade from harm by constantly circulating through the pathways like at chakra net within a human.

Weakness:It is only effective at close range fight even if it can cut multiple kunais,shuriken,and senbon being thrown at the user but even that requires focus and most importantly,that a user must stand in place which makes him open for ninjutsu atacks that come after.The weapon is almost indestructible because of the secret that resides within metal that is still a secret to todays blacksmithers.The true weakness of the blade is that it is easly overheatable,so when it comes intact with fire,the heat starts spreading all over the blade and using the chakra within as a fuel so it becomes unbareable to hold.If the blade goes out of chakra it becomes hard and has all of the weaknesses of the normal sword,so it needs infusing one more time.The sword is infact made of a very strong metal by which infusing the chakra within it makes him lighter.


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Post by Paksennarion Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:48 am

Uh... That's way too long. 12 feet?

Also, you weaknesses.
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Post by Hakai Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:47 am

Ok i changed the abillity of the weapon completly so what do you think...?
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Post by Paksennarion Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:49 am

Yorroichi wrote:
Chakra usage of the ability is 3.The chakra is infused in the begining but returns to the user when he again catches the blade,but if the weapon falls on the ground after being trown,the chakra does not returns to the user.

Weakness:It is only effective at close range fight even if it can cut multiple kunais,shuriken,and senbon being thrown at the user but even that requires focus and most importantly,that a user must stand in place which makes him open for ninjutsu atacks that come after.

You shouldn't be able to regain the CK unless you drop it, plus the ability is really strong. It should be 3 CK every other turn.

The weakness is good, but is there anything that can destroy it?
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Post by Hakai Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:02 am

zzz


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Post by Hakai Tue Sep 16, 2008 10:04 am

OK...i added some more weaknesses and discovered the secret of the sword to you.Sry if the sword was OP...i just let my ideas carry me.So does this makes it better?
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Post by Paksennarion Tue Sep 16, 2008 1:49 pm

1st acception.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:05 pm

Approved.
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