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Post by Minato Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:26 pm

Name: Minato "Silent As The Forest" Hitomi

Age: 20

Gender: Male.

Village: Leaf

Ninja Rank: Jounin

Clan: None

Looks: His hair is about shoulder length and brown in color and quite wavy. Whenever he turns his head his hair usually waves everywhere. He is 6'2 tall with a slim build. His face bears 2 long scars one across his left eye and the other across his cheek. His eyes are piercing jade color. He is wearing a Dark green jonin jacket with a navy blue shirt under it. His trousers are black and have a small pouch of kunai on the right leg for easy use.


Personality: Calm and Polite, Uses Honorifics like San and Kun when speaking. Is talkative now and no longer hold fear against anyone. Fiercly protective of his lover Daniwa, and puts her life before his. He also gets very annoyed when someone flirts with her, it is usually met with a swift punch in the face, or kick in the balls. When in battle he takesa life with mercy or hesitation, fairly layed back in general offering sage liike advice to his conrades, He is also a heavy drinker. He has tried many times to quit, but its a mental thing. when he was about 15 he started, as it made him forget his crappy homelife.

Special Characteristics: He is incredibly fast being ALMOST undetectable.

Elements: Wind Water.

Skills/Specialties: Nin and Tai

Jutsu’s:

Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: A
CK usage: 8 per clone.
Description:
Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person. Sasuke Uchiha claims that the Sharingan can tell the difference during his battle with Naruto at the Valley of the End.
Any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed. This makes the technique ideal for spying, since the user can simply send a clone to spy on a target, then have the clone disperse itself without returning to pass the information back to the user. It's also useful for training purposes, since the total amount of experience the user gains is multiplied by the total number of clones being used to train. Using it in this manner is far more difficult, however, since a large number of clones are needed to make a significant difference in the training time. It's unclear if other types of clones possess this advantage.
This technique is considered dangerous because of the manner in which the clones are created. Because the user divides their chakra among the clones, the user could potentially use up all their chakra fairly quickly if the user is low on chakra or makes too many clones, such as Naruto does with Multiple Shadow Clone Technique, this jutsu's enhanced (and forbidden) form. Naruto is able to use this technique to the extremes that he does because of his tailed beast, the nine-tailed demon fox, which gives him an abnormally high chakra level. Even without the demon fox's chakra, Naruto can make quite a few clones, but nowhere near on the level he can when he has access to the demon fox's chakra. The technique can also be dangerous if the user is injured or has some otherwise debilitating physical condition at the time of the cloning, since all of the clones will be created in roughly the same state

Name: Suiton: Goshokuzame (Water Release: Five Eating Sharks)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: A
CK usage: 8
Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.

Name: Suiro no Jutsu (Water Prison Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: C
CK usage: 5
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby

Stealth Walk
Rank: Unknown
Range: Self
Type: Support
Stealth walk makes Minato's footsteps unhearable and allows to move at incredible sppeds, he is also invisible while performing this Jutsu, however someone with exceptional hearing can find him, but there has yet to be someone who can.

History/Background: Minato was born into an unhappy house. His father was a drunk who regularly beat his wife nearly to death. However at the time Minato was too young to understand. When he was 4 years old, His nightmare began....His father in a drunken fueled rage attacked Minato with a knife leaving 2 long scars across his face. Minato fled the house, hald blinded with pain he stumbled across a jonin who was shocked at Minato's injurys. He took Minato to a safe palce and cleaned his wounds. Minato didnt cry however....The tears were beaten out of him. He still attends the accedemy, But often refuses to head home, and when he does he will turn up the next day covered in bruises.

He progressed through the Accademy at an average pace., the teachers noted of a technique that he made. Called The Stealth walk. It him invisible and fast at moving, making hhis movements undetectable.

ROLE PLAY SAMPLE: Thats it we have found him" Says a cloaked figure to his comrades as they circle Minato.
Minato stands calmly observing the 5 men surrounding him. No doubt they were assassins sent to kill him. "We have you at last....Silent As The Forest Minato". Minato chuckles at them. "You have no idea what your getting into buddy...If you wish to live I sugest you run...now". Minato then vanishes and appears behind the leader with a kunai to throat. "Never underestimate me". he then cuts the throat. The man drops to the ground dead. His comrades look on...And flee. Minato ignores them and walks away in the oppisite direction. He then smiles and cuts every throat before they realise he was there. One man was left alive. Minato walks over to him. He throws the kunai on the ground near him. "Tell your boss that Silent As The Forest, Says Hello". The man then fled. He retuns home. He reports what happened to the Hokage. "Assassins? Again?....The other villages must really fear you". Minato shrugs at this statement, "Yeah...I guess your right, Hokage-Sama". Minato leaves the hokages office and returns to his home. He sits on a chair and thinks about his next mission.


Last edited by Minato on Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:52 pm; edited 11 times in total (Reason for editing : the fucking retarded rules)
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Post by shinobiwan Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:31 pm

A little more personality and make sure some can detect you even when you use your tech. Also create your jutsu that you make in creation center.
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Post by shinobiwan Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:48 pm

1st approoval. Now just wait for a second one
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Post by Paksennarion Thu Nov 20, 2008 4:34 pm

Ah... Please remember to use the proper format.

Also, you only get six jutsu when you start out, and ANBU is not a starting rank. You'd need special permission to start out as a Jounin and your other option is an Academy Student. Also, you actually need to write out the appearance, we require six sentences.

Shino-san, please, please, please, please, stop accepting things that don't follow the rules. It creates a lot of imbalance and hassle.
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Post by shinobiwan Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:06 pm

Razz lol, hey man i just want everyone to be happy Wink well minato you do good and ill make sure you rank up quick Wink
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Post by Paksennarion Fri Nov 21, 2008 6:39 am

I understand the happy part, but doing so will overall make everyone else unhappy because it makes things totally out of whack. We need to stick to the rules if we want things to be fair and all of the people to have fun.
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Post by Minato Fri Nov 21, 2008 8:42 am

.....I hate you.......
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Post by Paksennarion Fri Nov 21, 2008 11:51 am

Uhm. Okay.
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Post by Minato Fri Nov 21, 2008 12:58 pm

Kidding ^^
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Post by Paksennarion Fri Nov 21, 2008 1:15 pm

I assumed. ^__^
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Post by shinobiwan Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:00 pm

lol ok paks lol
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Post by Paksennarion Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:12 pm

Minato wrote:Looks: At least six sentences describing your characters physical appearance.

Ah... Your appearance is gone. Did you edit it out for some reason?

Minato wrote:
Morning Peacock
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Asakujaku is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai first opens the sixth Celestial Gate Keimon, which gives him access to an enormous amount of chakra. Using this tremendous burst of power and speed, he will approach his opponent in a distinctive stance. When near enough, he will kick his opponent and launch them into the air. He will then strike them multiple times, causing the distinctive peacock fan to develop. His opponent will then fall back to the earth, covered in the strike's aura.


Ah, you'd need to jutsu to open the sixth gate in order to use this jutsu.

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Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

We already have this jutsu on the site and it is ranked as an A rank. Could you please change the jutsu with this one:

Paksennarion wrote:
Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: A
CK usage: 8 per clone.
Description:
Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person. Sasuke Uchiha claims that the Sharingan can tell the difference during his battle with Naruto at the Valley of the End.
Any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed. This makes the technique ideal for spying, since the user can simply send a clone to spy on a target, then have the clone disperse itself without returning to pass the information back to the user. It's also useful for training purposes, since the total amount of experience the user gains is multiplied by the total number of clones being used to train. Using it in this manner is far more difficult, however, since a large number of clones are needed to make a significant difference in the training time. It's unclear if other types of clones possess this advantage.
This technique is considered dangerous because of the manner in which the clones are created. Because the user divides their chakra among the clones, the user could potentially use up all their chakra fairly quickly if the user is low on chakra or makes too many clones, such as Naruto does with Multiple Shadow Clone Technique, this jutsu's enhanced (and forbidden) form. Naruto is able to use this technique to the extremes that he does because of his tailed beast, the nine-tailed demon fox, which gives him an abnormally high chakra level. Even without the demon fox's chakra, Naruto can make quite a few clones, but nowhere near on the level he can when he has access to the demon fox's chakra. The technique can also be dangerous if the user is injured or has some otherwise debilitating physical condition at the time of the cloning, since all of the clones will be created in roughly the same state.

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Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.

It's the same with this jutsu. Please change it to this:

Paksennarion wrote:Name: Suiton: Goshokuzame (Water Release: Five Eating Sharks)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: A
CK usage: 8
Description:
This jutsu is used when an opponent is knocked into water. From the water, five sharks are created and used to attack the opponent.

Minato wrote:
Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby

Same here too:

Paksennarion wrote:Name: Suiro no Jutsu (Water Prison Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: C
CK usage: 5
Description:
This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. Clones can be used in place of the actual person, provided that the clone is the one that performed the technique. This jutsu can't be performed without a sufficiently large body of water to supply the water for it. Neji Hyuga has been able to use his ability to release chakra from all of his pressure points to disrupt the flow of chakra inside the prison and break free. Despite the fact that the prison is made up entirely out of water, and the target is unable to move while within it, the target is still able to breathe.


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Stealth Walk
Rank: Unknown
Range: Self
Type: Support
Stealth walk makes Minato's footsteps unhearable and allows to move at incredible sppeds, he is also invisible while performing this Jutsu, however someone with exceptional hearing can find him, but there has yet to be someone who can.

This is a custom jutsu and needs to be accepted in the custom area.

Minato wrote: He finally became an ANBU and his name was known far and wide through the hidden villages, making him one of the most feared Shinobi of all time.

Please remove the mention of ANBU from the background.
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Post by Minato Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:53 pm

done and stealth walk is already approved
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Post by Paksennarion Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:09 pm

No it hasn't. All created jutsu need two approvals before they're accepted.

Stealth Walk only has one.
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Post by shinobiwan Thu Dec 04, 2008 7:10 pm

ok, as head admin, i am declaring this app approved. Paks im sorry but he's a good member, and this has gone on for too long. so yeah
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Post by Paksennarion Thu Dec 04, 2008 7:36 pm

What about his jutsu? I can't add it to the scroll section. I don't have a problem with anything else.
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Post by shinobiwan Thu Dec 04, 2008 8:12 pm

ive approved his jutsu, none of our other admins check
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Post by Paksennarion Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:11 pm

Uhms... That wasn't the issue... I replied to his jutsu app. awhile ago.
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Post by Sukoppu Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:53 pm

Well then.... What is the main issue Paks?
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