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Post by Ijin Mon Sep 01, 2008 1:47 am

Name: Ijin Keshin
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Village: Ex-Mist
Ninja Rank: Akatsuki
Clan: Keshin
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Personality: Ijin is sadistic and has no remorse for those he kills. Though at first meet you might no know. He is softly spoke and seems caring. He usually defends the weak and looks as he always has a smile on his face. Until he gets angry or serious then his mood can become demented and evil lusting for blood and others suffering his smile becomes demonic. Ijin can handle jokes and criticism but he hates people who act like they know the circumstance when they know nothing of his intension.

Special Characteristics:

Ijin was born with violent anger problems. Instead of just punching a wall he would destroy a nearby building. Several times that this has caused in innocent getting hurt. This illness derives from his partial demon genes. When in one of his violent outbreaks his eyes start shining yellow like that of a demon. These outbreaks tend to last until he has a place where he can calm down.

Ijin gain chakra from his environment so he is constantly is absorbing chakra. This ability came from the f act that the Keshin clan derived from demons. To stop him from overloading on chakra at birth a special seal was placed on him at birth. This seal restrains a lot of chakra. He uses 1/10 of his regular chakra which is the equivalent of an very exceptional jounin’s chakra. The more injured or the more his primal instincts take over. When the seal on Ijin has weaking he has the ability to create chakra limbs sprout from his body and perform the chakra clone jutsu without hand seals. Ijin has to pour chakra out of him once every week to so the seal isn’t broken.

Elements: Fire, Wind

Skills/Specialties: Ninjutsu , Medical Arts

Jutsus:
Name: Garandou kyuuban Souken Jutsu ( Void Sucker Creation Technique )
Rank: S
Type: Summoning, Clan
Chakra 10
Description: This Jutsu requires a focus point before it is used. (usually an object that can be gripped.) The jutsu has a 10 second delay. Afterward a demonic figure rises from the earth. The figure is Ethereal so unable to hit using normal methods. The Figure then starts draining the chakra of everything with in a 100ft radius. The chakra rips out of the victims bodies in a matter of seconds. The demonic figure will then slowly recede back into the ground. This jutsu is near impossible to use by anybody it requires a very large supply of chakra to use.

Name: Chakra Clone Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage 7
Description: This Jutsu creates a clone out of pure chakra. These clones can be used for various things. They can be absorbed by user or opponent which in turn could overload a person chakra system. The clone can destroy itself to use jutsus or turn itself into a pure chakra bomb. (Ijin and other people with overflowing chakra can create these clones without handsigns.)

Name: Kage Ontei (Shadow Step)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage 3
Description: This jutsu allows the user to move at high paces between shadows as long as they connect.

Name: Chakra Ekisu Jutsu (Chakra Extractor Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 5
Description: The user becomes a chakra magnet and starts to extract the chakra from the environment, other nearby ninjas, or any other nearby thing that contain chakra.

Name: Abareru Gufuu Shouheki Jutsu (Violent Tornado Enclosing Walls Technique)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 5
Description: This jutsu creates a large violent spiraling wind to surround the enmeny. The wind slowly closes around the foe the wind will start cutting the opponent. Along with making any object thrown into the tornado much more deadly.

Name: Art of Explosive Tag Making
Rank: C
Type: N/A
Chakra Usage: 2
Description: The user infuse a note made with special paper and ink with chakra making it explosive.

Name: Kaze no Yaiba (Blade of Wind)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short to Mid 0-10m
Rank: A
Description:
This jutsu creates a blade of wind. This blade is impossible to block because of its intangible nature. Unlike the Cutting Whirlwind Technique, this jutsu requires no tool.

Name: Katon: Kasumi Engo no Jutsu (Fire Release: Covering Mist Technique)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: A
Description:
This jutsu allows the user to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Kagero used this technique while disguised as Kabuto Yakushi.

Name: Katon: Haisekisho (Fire Release: Ash Product Burning)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: B
Description:
Unlike other fire-based jutsu, this jutsu allows the user to breathe out a cloud of superheated ash capable of causing third-degree burns. Because it is ash and not flame, the ash remains in the air around the target, and therefore remains potent for a longer period.

Name: Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: C
Description:
Utilizing a large amount of chakra, a large ball of flame is exhaled from the user's mouth. When an Uchiha clan member masters this technique, they are recognized as an adult. This technique also seems to be fairly common amongst Konoha's Chunin-level ninja.

Name: Futon: Daitoppa (Wind Release: Great Breakthrough)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short to Mid 0-10m
Rank: C
Description:
This jutsu sends out a powerful explosion of wind from the user's location, easily leveling anything in its path. A variation of this technique involves a smaller blast of wind that gets ignited with flame, making it stronger and more damaging to the target.

Healing Wave Technique (Chiyu Shuuha no Jutsu)
Rank: C
Type: Healing Ninjutsu
Ranged
While the healing hand technique is the choice of most medical ninja, sometimes the patient simply can't be gotten to in time to be healed. In those instances, this technique is used to heal them from afar. This jutsu focuses chakra into the hands of the user and then projects it towards the patient. While this jutsu is just as efficient at healing as the healing hands technique, this jutsu does cost considerably more chakra.

Killing Hands Technique (Satsugaite no Jutsu)
Rank: S
Type: Anti-Healing Ninjutsu
A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of chakra that is the complete opposite of the Healing Hands Technique. Through concentrating their chakra in a manner opposing the Chiyute, instead of rebuilding and restoring another person's cells, this jutsu intends to disrupt or even destroy a person's body.

Name: Shosen Jutsu (Mystical Palm Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: A
Description:
This jutsu is a multi-purpose medical technique used by medic-nin to heal wounds and perform surgery. For the former, the user concentrates chakra to their hand and applies it to a wound, speeding up cell regeneration. For the latter, the user focuses their chakra into a blade to make cuts where necessary. Because it is done with chakra, the user doesn't need to cut through their target's skin to reach muscles and organs. For this to be applied effectively in healing, a large amount of chakra is required. Using it to cut seems to be less chakra-intensive. This cutting aspect of this jutsu can also be used in combat, though it requires incredible precision on the user's part to be effective.

Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei (Exploding Tag: Activate)
Type: Supplementary
Range: All Ranges
Rank: E
Description:
Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. The exploding tags that the Third Hokage used were different than the usual bomb tags, being yellow in color instead of white with a red border.

History/Background Story: Ijin parents died when he was young they were murdered by a demon hunter clan. They managed to give him the special seal to suppress his chakra. They gave they baby away to an friend an old women that lived outside the mist village. Ijin lived with the women until he was 8. The women told him the bit of history of his parents she knew. Ijin went into a blind rage and killed her he left his home searching for the hunters and developing his skills. He finally found them when he was 10. He used his large amount of chakra and killed most of the clan. Afterwards he went to the Mist village and was taken in as a student of an explosive tag maker. The boy trained his skills with special jounin and powerful medical Jutsus. He became a jounin at 13 and was revered across the Mist. Until he had one of his outbreaks he ran away from the Mist becoming a rouge ninja. He used the name Rai to keep the mist of his trail. He tries to join the Akatsuki but was denied. He ended up creating his own organization called Keshin named after his clan. The Akatsuki didn’t like the competition and killed them. Only Ijin survived. Ijin spent the next several years refining his skills and waited for a chance to regain his power.


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Post by Paksennarion Mon Sep 01, 2008 1:57 am

The character seems fine. But the Clan needs to be accepted along with the jutsu.

Please wait for that to happen first. ^__^
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Mon Sep 01, 2008 12:19 pm

After all that is done, then the Akatsuki leader will give you the thumbs up or down.
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Post by Paksennarion Mon Sep 01, 2008 12:35 pm

Your custom jutsu have been accepted.

But there is a new rule in effect which states that you may only have 6 jutsu at the most at the start of your character. Please pair down on your jutsu until you have 6 or less.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Mon Sep 01, 2008 12:45 pm

Just let this one slide because he did post this before the rule was posted. You got lucky! ^^
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Post by Sukoppu Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:38 pm

This is totally awesome!

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Post by Paksennarion Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:40 pm

Once your Clan has been accepted you should be all set to go.
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Post by Sukoppu Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:43 pm

Shall I move this to Bingo Book? Or should I transfer it after his clan has been accepted?
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Post by Paksennarion Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:47 pm

Please wait for his Clan.
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Post by Sukoppu Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:48 pm

Ok.
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Post by Paksennarion Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:56 pm

Accepted.
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