gale new uchiha

[gale]

Name:gale

Age:12


Gender: male

Village: leaf


Ninja Rank: academy

Clan:uchiha

Looks:avatar

Personality: like sasuke sometimes but he like the rush of combat,He don't like it when you bother he friends.he have amazeing will to fight.he don't quit. When it come down to his friends he will not back down.He is very smart he do not show his anger. He is very calm most of the time and love to cook.



Special Characteristics:waiting to use sharingan, but other than that his kung fu

Elements:wind;lightning

Skills/Specialties: :Taijutsu, Ninjutsu,



History/Background Story: Gale is kohaku's brother,And they where very nice to one another and gale like cook like his brother. On the day gale was talking about taking a sparing break and went to the weapon shop. And started to think of all of the weapons and thinking about the way weapons are usefull to ninjas.So gale walked back to the house think about the weapons and really wanted to see if his brother would like the weapons like he did. But on the way he went to the ramen shop to get something to eat he was kiddnapped by a chunin of the moon village and put in a room of other kids. Gale was so mad he unlocked tome 1 sharingan and he beat all that got in his way he made sharingan a secret. gale is going to wait to he get to genin.




jutsu:


Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: E
CK usage: 2
Description:
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise, which Sasuke has done twice in the anime. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.
This technique is sometimes referred to as the Art of Projection ("Utsusemi no Jutsu") in other manga and anime series.














Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: E
CK usage: 2 per clone.
Description:
This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).


Roleplay Sample:Gale and kohaku started sparing. They started to look at each other and then gale ran forward and jump and kohaku jumped the tree to get higher and started to float and came down with a strong axe kick. Gale ran to the tree on the and got in his defence stance. KOHAKUwas about to take out a kunai but it went boom and kohaku fell back and he look at gale he look at kohaku. They ran to the each other and in a flash there father stop both there punchs.

[Matsutsu]

alright two body flicker fix What does he look like and Dont not with talk horrible grammar and fix tomoe one sharingan.

[gale]

what part have bad gramer

[Kiza Byarigan]

You can only start off with E-rank(academy jutsu) or D-rank bloodlines, so get rid of:

Thousand Years of Pain
Leaf Whirlwind
Headhunter
and Body Flicker

[gale]

Thousand Years of Pain is E rank right?

[Sukoppu]

No, it's C rank.

[shinobiwan]

You need more on personality. Also make sure you asess his abilities as a fighter. Physical traits like height and weight. Along with a picture you can get online.

[Kiza Byarigan]

Unless you get an avatar then you don't need a picture.

[gale]

it is going to take a while

[Paksennarion]

Well, also remember that you need to fix your grammer. At the very least use periods and upper case letters to begin sentances.

[Kiza Byarigan]

Just write it in a word document it's easier.

[gale]

OK AND BY THE WAY I WAS

[gale]

IS THIS GOOD ENOUGH

[Sukoppu]

Please stop double posting, stop being impatient and I'll look it over.

[Sukoppu]

Ok.
1. You need 6 sentences at least, for your looks.
2. You need at least 6 sentences for your personality.
3. You need to put a RolePlay Example.
4. Please end your sentences with periods, and start them with capital letters.
5. You can have up to 6 Jutsus, so go ahead and add a few.
6. They can only be E or D rank.

[gale]

THANKS FOR LISTING IT DOWN

[Sukoppu]

No problem. Can't wait ta see it when it's done.

[shinobiwan]

I guess it works for now.

1st acception

[Paksennarion]

Your jutsu needs to be accepted since it isn't one that we currently have on this site.

[gale]

it is a bloodline

[Paksennarion]

I know. And it needs to be accepted first.

[gale]

Ithink this is it

[Paksennarion]

Your jutsu haven't been accepted yet.

[gale]

done

[gale]

done

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