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Post by Sukoppu Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:21 pm

Name: Sukoppu Odokemono

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Village: Sand Village

Ninja Rank: Jounin

Clan: Odokemono (Joker Clan.)

Looks:
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Sutaza is a tall, bulky Jounin. He is rough and his skin feels like that of a sharks. He has white hair and blue eyes, almost gray looking. Across his left eye is a mark he put on his face during a battle with an Akatsuki member, that mark giving him rememberance of his victory. It was made from his own blood, which he never got rid of. He wears a large black robe, and has a large sword on the left side of his waist. He wears a white glove of his left hand, cause his hand was burnt. On the glove is an insignia, much like that of an alchemy circle. On his right hand are 3 rings, two on his index finger, and one on his ring finger. He wears pendant necklace around his neck, made of gold, and another pendant, which is long and hidden beneath his black robe. The robe is hooded, and normally when he goes out, he is seen with it over his face. He wears

Personality: Sukoppu is a very quiet guy, and feels very insecure with himself at times. He never takes his glove off, since beneath it's burnt. He has a great distaste for Akatsuki and has no goals but to destroy them. He is very fond of the Kazekage, being that he made it as high a rank as that, he is his idol. He wishes to work beside the Kazekage, Kiza Byarigan, and hopefully, one day, take his place as the Kazekage of Sunagakure. Sukoppu is very good with girls, being that everywhere he goes a girl can be seen watching him, or even following him, which is why he constantly looks back, or is seen talking to a girl. Sukoppu is very loving of his sword, E-Su, meaning Ace, which is very good, combo'd with his card techniques.

Special Characteristics: As a member of the Odokemono clan, Sukoppu has a good ability of performing jutsus requiring decks of cards. This bloodline is called the "Karuto Setsudanki," meaning "Card Cutter." Sukoppu is the only member of his clan who is capable of "Card Cutting," but is still new to the technique, as obtained from his Father, E-Su Odokemono, from genes. Sukoppu is very well-handled at this technique however, able to increase the power of his techniques using his outstanding speed. The nature of the Odokemono clan is that, one day, earlier in the past, they were attacked, but fended off the intruders using their Secret Hidden Technique (( That's not the name, just that it is in Jutsu's.)), capable of use by Sukoppu, taught by his father. This technique was very useful, and while fending off the intruders, made the Odokemono clan very well known.

Elements: Wind/Fire

Skills/Specialties: Cards/Speed

Jutsus:

Name: 4 Game Joker's
Rank: B
Description: Sukoppu throws several cards in the air, quickly pulling out his sword. He then slashes them all in half, holding a Joker in hand. The joker is thrown at the opponent at quick speeds and after all the cards have been slashed in half he then jumps at each card, throwing each half at the opponent quickly.
Chakra Usage: 5/10

Name: 4 Game Ace's
Rank: A
Description: Sukoppu throws 4 ace's in the air, each marked with an alchemy insignia. He then hits each cards with his glove, making them ignite into flames, but they remain intact. They are then thrown at the enemy at quick speeds, when making contact, they burn the skin of the enemy, while also cutting the area deep to the nerve.
Chakra Usage: 7/10

Name: 4 Game King's
Rank: A
Description: Sukoppu throws 4 king's in the air, each marked with the alchemy insignia. He hits each one with his glove, making them become covered in a strange, violently forceful, wind. They remain intact, until thrown at the enemy, where they then split up, each into 8 pieces, each gaining momentum and speed as they rush at the enemy. When they make contact they cut the enemy, even through their cloth. This technique is capable of cutting through chain mail armor.
Chakra Usage: 7/10

Name: 4 Game Queen's
Rank: A
Description: Sukoppu, with the use of his sword, throws several cards, which seem to freeze in the air. He slashes through them with his sword, each half connecting to it, becoming like kunai on the edges of his sword. His sword becomes a bit larger, but not heavier and he quickly slashes at the opponent from afar, the cards returning to normal upon contact with the enemies skin, cutting them deep into their body.
Chakra Usage: 7/10

Name: 4 Game Jack's
Rank: A
Description: Sukoppu, using his sword, slashes into the ground. From the ground sprouts several jacks. Using his alchemy glove he quickly hits the ground, causing the cards to spring up into the air. He slashes through each cards making the fall to the ground. Like live kunai's, they spring up and attack the enemy, followed by an after image of Sukoppu, quickly slashing through the enemy. The cards are a distraction for Sukoppu, and after the cards have gone by, Sukoppu is behind the enemy, having already slashed through their side, or any other area he may have aimed at.
Chakra Usage: 8/10

Name: Double Ace's- Full House
Rank: A
Description: Sukoppu throws Ace's all around him, a king among them. The freeze high in the air. Sukoppu raises his sword in the air, letting the glint of the sword hit each card. They ignite into flames. Sukoppu slashes his sword, making a gust of wind cause the cards to fly at the opponent. He slashes through the cards as they're approaching the enemy, causing them to split in half. This also causes the cards to rotate like Shuriken flying through the air, burning the enemy in the areas it cuts them.

History/Background Story: Sukoppu was born and raised in the village of Sunagakure. Living there for some time, starting at the age of 6, he trained hard, playing cards with all the friends he had, normally winning every time. He did train with his sword, which he obtained at age 7. As he progressed with the sword, he was taught the Jutsu of the Odokemono clan. He was a straight "A" student in the Academy and steadily grew up, where at age 8, he began the actual Sand Academy. There he kept his "A's" never going anywhere lower. Being the age he was, that was an amazing accomplishment, which everybody in the Academy acknowledged. Sukoppu had no care who acknowledged him however, besides the Kazekage, Kiza Byarigan. He looked up to Kiza as a role-model, almost more than his dad. The Kazekage, being as strong as he was, was his role-model because he always made him wanna try harder than he ever did before. His Dad, was his role-model because he always wished him good-bidding's and keep good care. He always kept him safe, and helped teach him everything he knew. Sukoppu never went against the teachings of the teacher and wore the same robe he does now everyday of his life, believing it was good luck. At age 9-14, Sukoppu became associated with girls, both younger and older than him. He also met Ukokei Miraa, who was always one step better than him, no matter what he did. He thought of Ukokei as his closest friend however, until one day, when he became 17, Ukokei left the Sand Village to go back to the Leaf Village. It seemed that Ukokei arrived, but his headband was cut, giving away he was now a missing nin. Sukoppu couldn't believe this information, and thought about it. After a month, he heard Akatsuki was back, but thought Ukokei had destroyed the last one. It turned out, the new Akatsuki was formed by his very best friend. He hated to hear it, but it was true. He met up with Ukokei one day in the woods, but they did not fight, but simply walked by each other. Sukoppu has now aquired a minor distaste with Ukokei for ruining their friendship, and he despises all others who have joined in his horrible conquest. This caused Sukoppu to hide himself from the world, under his hood, being that he was a friend of the new Leader of Akatsuki. He couldn't stand himself and went to the Kazekage, requesting that he may work by his side, but never got an answer.

ROLE PLAY SAMPLE: *Sukoppu performed signs, quickly vanishing. He was simply moving fast, where the only give-away of his movement was the glint of his sword. The second swordsman brought his sword forward, but too slow, as the picture he had seen before him was an after-image, revealing Sukoppu behind the swordsman already, having slashed into his side with his sword. The man fell over, his side bleeding profusely.* "That was the best you got." *He said, slowly walking away, sheathing his sword. He was on his way back to the Sand Village, completing the mission he had been given. He walked into the Kazekage's office, bowing.* "I have completed my mission, sir." *The Kage simply grinned and marked the mission complete. He then sent Sukoppu off, letting him rest for the evening.*


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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:31 pm

I like the character concept. Although you have conflicting information about your relationship with Akatsuki. Do you hate all except Ukokei? I'm just clarifying.

I will accept this character, but you need to get the jutsu and Clan accepted first. ^__^
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Post by Sukoppu Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:32 pm

Actually he hates all of them, and he has a horrible grudge against Ukokei for betraying their once had friendship. Oooh I'm so adding that to the History.
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:35 pm

You can't know that S rank though.
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Post by Sukoppu Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:48 pm

Why not? Jounin can know S-rank jutsus. It's only one. And it is the main jutsu of the clan.... Also it's the jutsu he used to kill the Akatsuki member.
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:50 pm

Jutsu Tree
Academy Student - May learn E rank and D rank jutsu.
Genin - May learn E rank, D rank and C rank jutsu.
Chuunin - May learn E rank, D rank, C rank, and B rank jutsu.
Jounin - May learn E rank, D rank, C rank, B rank, and A rank jutsu.
Akatsuki and Kage - May learn E rank, D rank, C rank, B rank and S rank jutsu.
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Post by Sukoppu Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:52 pm

Are you serious?.... Man. And I was thinkin of how to get that jutsu into this for 10 minutes. You approved it in Clan Jutsu and Custom Jutsu though.... You know that right?
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:53 pm

I'm sorry.
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Post by Sukoppu Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:53 pm

That's ok. Go ahead and put that jutsu in the scroll sections under Odokemono Clan Jutsus and I'll make a new one. ^_^
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:54 pm

I'll work on that later. I needs sleep.

But tomorrow it'll be up. Promise.
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Post by Sukoppu Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:59 pm

Ok. Thanks a lot Paks. ^_^
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Post by Paksennarion Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:03 pm

You're officially accepted. All of your jutsu have been accepted and added to the scroll section.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Sun Sep 07, 2008 1:17 pm

~2nd Approval~
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Post by Sukoppu Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:22 am

Edited, changed to Anbu.
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Post by Paksennarion Sat Nov 15, 2008 8:17 am

Uh. Did your character pass the ANBU exam? And all that stuff?
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Post by Sukoppu Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:53 pm

Omg that's right! I forgot about those. Nvm. Returned to Jounin.
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Post by Paksennarion Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:17 am

Okay.
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