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Post by Sukoppu Tue Sep 09, 2008 4:42 pm

Name: High Ace: Double Kings
Rank: A
CK usage: 8/10
Description: Sukoppu moves at high speeds, leaving an after-image behind him. He slashes past the enemy, quickly cutting their sides. While this happens, the after-image produces an after-image of itself. The original after-image slashes through the opposite side, while the final after-image cuts through the center of the enemy. These images were the user slashing at high speeds.

Name: High Ace: Double Queens
Rank: A
CK usage: 8/10
Description: Sukoppu moves at high speeds, followed by multiple after-images. The after-images are stacked on each other, one after another. Sukoppu jumps up, quickly coming down on the enemy with his sword. Due to the after-images, it seems like the attack goes on for a short few seconds. (3 seconds.)

Name: High Ace: Double Jacks
Rank: A
CK usage: 8/10
Description: Sukoppu moves at high speeds, running around the enemy. With this it looks like he's running both ways. The user throws a card at the enemy, quickly grabbing it as he runs around. He repeats this process for a limited amount of time. (30 seconds.)

Name: High Ace: Double Joker
Rank: S
CK usage: 9/10
Description: Using his sword, Sukoppu splits it, giving him two swords. He vanishes from sight, quickly coming down from above. These swords have small wave type motion to them. The swords split altogether into several pieces, held together by chain-like material. He slashes them in multiple areas, capable by the chains, allowing them to sway several pieces of the swords to several different areas.

Name: Throw Down: Texas Hold 'Em
Rank: S
CK usage: 10/10
Description: Sukoppu must be dashing at the opponent to use this technique. He unsheaths his sword, making time around him stop for that moment. Sukoppu quickly slashes through the stomach of the enemy, time resuming after the sword has made its way through the opponent.

Name: Throw Down: Poker Face
Rank: S
CK usage: 9/10
Description: Sukoppu pulls out his sword, cards forming over his face in the shape of a mask. The user has a smiling mask of joker cards on his face. This mask allows Sukoppu quicker movement and his techniques are upgraded by an extra 10% strength increase, while there is an extra 7% increase in success function of his techniques.

Name: Card Clone
Rank: S
CK usage: 9/10
Description: Using a deck of cards, Sukoppu forms a clone made of cards. The clone is immune to fire, earth, wind, lightning, ice and chakra based techniques. They are not immune to water however, meaning they can easily be destroyed after wet. These clones are equal to Sukoppu in every aspect, except physically.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Tue Sep 09, 2008 9:01 pm

All seem fine, except this:

Name: Throw Down: Poker Face
Rank: S
CK usage: 9/10
Description: Sukoppu pulls out his sword, cards forming over his face in the shape of a mask. The user has a smiling mask of joker cards on his face. This mask allows Sukoppu quicker movement and his techniques are upgraded by an extra 10% strength increase, while there is an extra 7% increase in success function of his techniques.

This seems to be more of an equipment item than a jutsu to me.
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Post by Sukoppu Wed Sep 10, 2008 7:52 am

The thing about it is, when it's used, the item can't just be brought of your pocket or something. It requires chakra and the deck of cards. So what it is is cards melding with chakra.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:13 pm

I'll see what Paks says about it.
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Post by Sukoppu Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:17 pm

Ok.
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Post by Paksennarion Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:23 pm

UkokeiMiraa wrote:Name: High Ace: Double Kings
Rank: A
CK usage: 8/10
Description: Sukoppu moves at high speeds, leaving an after-image behind him. He slashes past the enemy, quickly cutting their sides. While this happens, the after-image produces an after-image of itself. The original after-image slashes through the opposite side, while the final after-image cuts through the center of the enemy. These images were the user slashing at high speeds.

Hehe, this one sounds confusing. So it's a total of 3 attacks? Or 4 since people have two sides... T.T Paks is kinda negative common sense sometimes.

UkokeiMiraa wrote:
Name: High Ace: Double Queens
Rank: A
CK usage: 8/10
Description: Sukoppu moves at high speeds, followed by multiple after-images. The after-images are stacked on each other, one after another. Sukoppu jumps up, quickly coming down on the enemy with his sword. Due to the after-images, it seems like the attack goes on for a short few seconds. (3 seconds.)

Hms, this is cool!

UkokeiMiraa wrote:
Name: High Ace: Double Jacks
Rank: A
CK usage: 8/10
Description: Sukoppu moves at high speeds, running around the enemy. With this it looks like he's running both ways. The user throws a card at the enemy, quickly grabbing it as he runs around. He repeats this process for a limited amount of time. (30 seconds.)


I don't get the use of this jutsu. You throw a card and then catch it. Do you hit the opponent and then catch it? Or is it just a distraction technique?

UkokeiMiraa wrote:
Name: High Ace: Double Joker
Rank: S
CK usage: 9/10
Description: Using his sword, Sukoppu splits it, giving him two swords. He vanishes from sight, quickly coming down from above. These swords have small wave type motion to them. The swords split altogether into several pieces, held together by chain-like material. He slashes them in multiple areas, capable by the chains, allowing them to sway several pieces of the swords to several different areas.

Does this make a physical double? Or is is just the speed making it look like two? Basically this is making the sword flexible like a chain sorta only sharp, right?

UkokeiMiraa wrote:
Name: Throw Down: Texas Hold 'Em
Rank: S
CK usage: 10/10
Description: Sukoppu must be dashing at the opponent to use this technique. He unsheaths his sword, making time around him stop for that moment. Sukoppu quickly slashes through the stomach of the enemy, time resuming after the sword has made its way through the opponent.

You make time stop? ...Maybe a better word choice would be that time slowed down (a lot).

UkokeiMiraa wrote:
Name: Throw Down: Poker Face
Rank: S
CK usage: 9/10
Description: Sukoppu pulls out his sword, cards forming over his face in the shape of a mask. The user has a smiling mask of joker cards on his face. This mask allows Sukoppu quicker movement and his techniques are upgraded by an extra 10% strength increase, while there is an extra 7% increase in success function of his techniques.

I don't like this jutsu. Since we don't have concrete stats, percentages don't work so well. Plus there isn't a real reason for this to happen. Why would a mask increase your abilities?

UkokeiMiraa wrote:
Name: Card Clone
Rank: S
CK usage: 9/10
Description: Using a deck of cards, Sukoppu forms a clone made of cards. The clone is immune to fire, earth, wind, lightning, ice and chakra based techniques. They are not immune to water however, meaning they can easily be destroyed after wet. These clones are equal to Sukoppu in every aspect, except physically.

It would be 9 Ck per clone. Also... Does that mean that they can preform jutsu and have all your other skills like CK pool and speed and endurance?
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Post by Sukoppu Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:35 pm

The mask, by %-age it's supposed to mean it simply raises my abilities, I chose random percents. The clones are 9 per and it matches each of my abilities, besides physicality. The mask is kinda like Matsutsu's where the technique's are raised in energy and that. The sword jutsu is literally two swords that are chained and yeah, they're sharp. The card goes through the opponent and I catch it, then I do it again, and again and again. And yeah times slowed down a lot.
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