Sokkenai, Hiyaritoshita

[Rito]

Name: Sokkenai, Hiyaritoshita, preferably Rito

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Village: Leaf

Ninja Rank:Academy Student.

Clan: The Sokkenai clan which I created in the clan creation section, though I don't think it's accepted yet.

Looks: She has pure white hair and white eyes. Rito wears an open black and gold overcoat with a black and gold blouse and skirt. She usually wears a gold and black sheathe on her waste with a golden rapier in it. Rito has black circlet on her head with a golden crest on the front. Her hair goes down to her knees. She is thin and has her hair out most of the time, though it becomes a hassle every once in a while.



Personality: She is extremely shy and hates being around men. When a man gets close to her, her Level one kekkei genkai starts to activate unless she knows the person and is comfortable with the man. When in battle she gets very frightened. She loves to read and stays in the library most of the time. When outside she remains cautious at all times unless with somebody she can trust deeply and knows that nothing bad will happen with them around. While in a large group or assaulted by a man, she will usually cry out and then activate her kekkei genkai.

Special Characteristics: She's been able to activate her level 3 Kekkei Genkai on accident from a very young age.

Elements: Water + Wind = Ice

Skills/Specialties: Weaponry, medical Jutsu

Jutsu’s:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

History/Background Story: Rito was born in the Village hidden in the snow with an odd Kekkei genkai. She had started to learn how to use her level 1 kekkei genkai forcefully, which made her life a little harder because she also accidentally activated her kekkei genkai at bad times. Rito trained on trees, getting frost to grow on them. Eventually they started to freeze on the outside of them and rito had activated her level 2 kekkei genkai, but she wasn't able to activate it as easily as her level 1. While she was young and her father was gone a mysterious man broke into her house and raped and killed Rito's mother while she was sitting right there, watching. Rito got so frightened that she accidentally activated her level 3 Kekkei Genkai, killing the man. She hid in the closet until her father came home and she told him the entire story. They decided to move to the Village Hidden in the Sand where Rito's father got angry and killed a man using his level 2 kekkei genkai. He was put to death for it and Rito has been living by herself in the church for the rest of her life up until now.

ROLE PLAY SAMPLE: Rito walked across the halls of the academy. She started to slow down to make it look like she wasn't rushing so people wouldn't bother her. Rito slightly loosened the grip on the book in her hand. She stopped and looked out the window to her right, focusing on a tree that had flowers starting to blossom. Rito slightly smiled at the beautiful color of the sakura leaf.She focused back onto the end of the hall and continued to walk, still smiling. Once she reached the end of the hall, Rito turned and walked out the door, smiling up to the sky, her eyes sparkling in the sun. She flipped her hair back and continued to walk, following a path clear of people, hoping to get to her house as quickly as possible.

[Paksennarion]

Lalala, it's been awhile since I've actually done this. So, sorry for the wait. ^__^

Name: Sokkenai, Hiyaritoshita, preferably Rito

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Village: Sand

Ninja Rank:Academy Student.

First off, the name is awesome, and you get points in my book for both creating an older academy student, and also actually creating an academy student. Thank you! We really need those AS. ^__^

Clan: The Sokkenai clan which I created in the clan creation section, though I don't think it's accepted yet.

I'll go check on that in a minute, if it hasn't been accepted, I'll look at it and stuff. If it has, I'll reply back here.

Looks: She has pure white hair and white eyes. Rito wears an open black and gold overcoat with a black and gold blouse and skirt. She usually wears a gold and black sheathe on her waste with a golden rapier in it. Rito has black circlet on her head with a golden crest on the front. Her hair goes down to her knees.

Sorry, you need one more sentence about what she looks like. The minimum is six sentences. Maybe describe her body type? Or her hair style? Stuff like that.

Personality: She is extremely shy and hates being around men. When a man gets close to her, her Level one kekkei genkai starts to activate unless she knows the person and is comfortable with the man. When in battle she gets very frightened.

Again, you need six sentences. Please talk more about about other facets of her personality. What makes her happy? Does she get angry at certain things? What does she like doing? Expand the idea please.

Special Characteristics: She's been able to activate her level 3 Kekkei Genkai on accident from a very young age.

I think this'll depend on her kekkei genkei, so I'll get back to you on it.

Elements: Water + Wind = Ice

This is fine, but we don't accept ice based jutsu. So you can have this, your character just won't be able to use ice based jutsu, because it's over used and also it's a kekkei genkei. So logically not everyone would have it, unless you're in the Haku Clan. (Which is an open Clan at the moment.)

Skills/Specialties: Weaponry, medical Jutsu

This is fine.

Jutsu’s:
Dokunuki - Poison Removal
Rank: D
~Dokunuki is a skill used by medical ninja to remove harmful poisons from a patient's body. The ninja will infuse their chakra into liquid, which they will insert into the patient. They will then use the liquid as a medium to draw out the poison from the cells. This mix can then be removed from the body. Depending on the deadliness of the poison, further treatment with an antidote or medicine may be required.

This is a jutsus that we already have. On this site it is an A rank. Here's the actual jutsu:

Name: Dokunuki no Jutsu (Poison Extraction Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short 0-5m
Rank: A
CK usage: 8
Description:
This ornate jutsu uses chakra to literally pull foreign materials from someone's body, no doubt requiring precise control on the user's part to avoid causing further internal injuries to their patient. Sakura uses this technique to remove Sasori's poison from Kankuro after their battle. None of the medic-nin on hand could perform the technique, so it is no doubt quite difficult to perform properly.

Sorry, but you can't have that jutsu at the moment.

Heal
Rank: D
~Pours chakra into something allowing its injuries to heal.

This is an imitation of another jutsu already on this site. We can't allow it. This would be the actual jutsu:

Healing Hand Skill (Chiyute no Jutsu)
Rank: C
Type: Healing Ninjutsu
CK usage: 5
Description: A technique that concentrates chakra into the hand. The user then transmits the chakra into the patient through touch. The chakra seeks out and regenerates destroyed cells by enhancing the body's own natural healing process.

So, the two jutsu that you listed you cannot use. All medical ninja jutsu are at least C rank or higher sadly. Please choose other jutsu for your application. I would recommend choosing some of the average Academy Student jutsu that all Academy Students know. Like Henge and Replacement.

History/Background Story: Rito was born in the Village hidden in the snow with an odd Kekkei genkai. While she was young and her father was gone a mysterious man broke into her house and raped and killed Rito's mother while she was sitting right there, watching. Rito got so frightened that she accidentally activated her level 3 Kekkei Genkai, killing the man. She hid in the closet until her father came home and she told him the entire story. They decided to move to the Village Hidden in the Sand where Rito's father got angry and killed a man using his level 2 kekkei genkai. He was put to death for it and Rito has been living by herself in the church for the rest of her life up until now.

It is unlikely that someone would activate the third rank of a kekkei genkai even after seeing something as traumatizing as that. Perhaps you should have something about her activating the first and possibly second level before this happened? That would be more realistic.

ROLE PLAY SAMPLE: Rito walked across the halls of the academy. She started to slow down to make it look like she wasn't rushing so people wouldn't bother her. Rito slightly loosened the grip on the book in her hand. She stopped and looked out the window to her right, focusing on a tree that had flowers starting to blossom. Rito slightly smiled at the beautiful color of the sakura leaf.She focused back onto the end of the hall and continued to walk, still smiling.

I would like it if you made this longer, but that's just a personal opinion. ^__^ I'll go look at you Clan now and reply back. Please edit your original post to change the things I mentioned. If you have any questions with what I said, please PM me and ask or post and I'll try and clarify/help you.

Once again, thanks for creating an Academy Student, especially in Suna. I hope we get to roleplay together. ^__^

[Paksennarion]

Okay, so I looked at your Clan application. There are several things you need to do before I can accept it, but they shouldn't take that long.

I now realize that your elements mixing into ice is okay so long as your Clan gets accepted, just remember that the only time you can use the element ice is with your Clan jutsu.

[Rito]

I edited

[Paksennarion]

Thank you, you fixed everything I mentioned. It looks fine now, so long as your Clan gets accepted. Good job. ^__^

[shinobiwan]

2nd approoval. have fun ^^

[Rito]

Yay

[Ijin]

3rd aproval

[Rito]

I haven't started RPing yet, could I change to the Leaf Village? I have found an offer to be in a three person genin group that's in the Leaf, and I have no problem switching.

[shinobiwan]

Already done. have fun ^^

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