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Post by Onbin Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:59 pm

Onbin found his way to the area where his first lesson would begin. He wasn't sure on what to expect he heard it was simulated combat so prepared Umi to strike.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Tue Sep 09, 2008 9:30 pm

Another academy student came in, looking at you tilting his head.
"Are you...", he paused to look down at his assigned opponent; then continued, "Umi?"
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Post by Onbin Tue Sep 09, 2008 9:36 pm

He looked at the student with a dark look. "I'm not, I am Onbin." A kunai slide from his under his sleave into his hand. "This is Umi." He said holding the blade towards the acad student. He already didn't like him here and he messed his name up. "So are you my...spar partner."
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Tue Sep 09, 2008 9:45 pm

"Nope, I'm Umi's partner." He said softly
The scrawny little kid left the room and another came in, this one way more muscular and older looking.
"I'm here to demolish Onbin." Said the kid laughing as he did so.
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Post by Onbin Tue Sep 09, 2008 9:58 pm

"So I hope the hospital has a room ready for you." He said with a smirk and the kunai read to attack. "you can go first heh heh heh." He waited ready to study his foes moves hoping that other pesky kid wouldn't try to actually help Onbin.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:48 pm

"The only one here going to the hospital is you little puny weakling." He said as he also pulled out a kunai and stood watching Onbin, watch him.
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Post by Onbin Wed Sep 10, 2008 7:06 pm

Onbin gripped Umi tightly and started to run at the large student. He watched is moves carefully and never got in range of a punch or kick. Onbin wanted to get an idea of this ninjas fighting style before he started any sort of combat. After getting a bit of knowledge on his foe's pattern he stops about 20 feet away from him he pulled out a kunai and took a defensive stance.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Wed Sep 10, 2008 7:38 pm

((I'm making up a name so it will be easier to say than opponent all the time, Koga Uchiha.))

Koga took the kunai he had and sent it flying before charging at Onbin.
"I'd just like to warn you that I am an Uchiha." He said as he activated his sharigan.
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Post by Onbin Thu Sep 11, 2008 3:57 pm

Onbin avoided the kunai and smirked. “Ha so what if your part of the Uchiha clan. That isn’t that much of an honor anymore is it.” He held his kunai straight out at the Uchiha. He also pulled an other kunai out and put it into a throwing position with Umi pointed at him he waited to see what he would do.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Thu Sep 11, 2008 8:54 pm

Koga started running towards Onbin, jumping into the air then trying to land a flying kick on him dropped down with great speed.
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Post by Onbin Thu Sep 11, 2008 9:10 pm

Onbin knew he had no time for an orthodox move he threw his regular kunai in the air. He quickly dropped to the ground the Uchiha right over him he started preforming handsigns and shouts. "Kawarimi no Jutsu" He switched places with his kunai and was now above the boy he threw 6 senbon needles at the Uchiha hoping for a hit.

======Chakra 8/10=========


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Post by Kiza Byarigan Thu Sep 11, 2008 9:12 pm

Three of the senbon hit Koga right in the back, but he quickly pulled them out and tried sending them back at Onbin.
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Post by Onbin Thu Sep 11, 2008 9:25 pm

Onbin blocked two of them with Umi and the other one hit him in his right forearm. Onbin noticed a small bucket of water nearby. He quickly moved towards it and made handsigns, he shouts. "Mizu Buki" A small shield of water had formed around Onbins hand umi's blade poked out of the water. Onbin charged at the Uchiha and threw 2 senbon at him and getting ready to stab him with Umi.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:49 pm

Koga dodged both senbon and tried throwing a kunai with an explosive tag down infront of where Onbin was standing, in attempt to blow him back. He threw his own arms up in a gaurd knowing the blow would probably knock him back as well.
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Post by Onbin Fri Sep 12, 2008 7:28 pm

Onbin quickly made the handsigns and shouted "Kawarimi no Jutsu" Onbin switched places with the kunai which still maintained it's speed. Onbin ran at the Uchiha awith Umi. He heard the explosion in the back just barly missing him.

=============Chakra 6/10================


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Post by Kiza Byarigan Fri Sep 12, 2008 7:46 pm

((Original...I like it! ^^))
Koga started making a few handseals and when he was done he stood, waiting to be attacked.
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Post by Onbin Fri Sep 12, 2008 7:57 pm

Onbin stopped at seeing him make handsigns and do nothing afterwards. He threw 3 senbon needles at the Uchiha. and then started charging again trying to make sure even if he blocked the senbons he woud only have a split second to block Umi.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:08 pm

Koga dodged all the senbon and as Onbin attacked with Umi he replaced himself with a piece of chalk from up on the board. As he appeared by the board he sent three kunai and two shuriken at Onbin.
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Post by Onbin Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:24 pm

"Crap ot a break" He jump out of the way and starts making handsigns and shouts "Kanashibari no Jutsu" he paralyzes the Uchiha in pace (Hopefully if not disreguard any thing i'm about to say.) He hoolds Umi to his throat and then puts Umi away. He raises his hhand out towards the Uchiha and quietly says. "You are strong and I respect that. I think we proved ourselves don't you think so."

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Post by Kiza Byarigan Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:33 pm

Koga grabbed his hand, flipping him onto the ground.
"Who said this is over?" He yelled as he kicked towards him on the ground.
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Post by Onbin Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:38 pm

"Fools make enemies with there comrades." He grabs the Uchiha's leg and stabs him in the back of the knee and pushes him away. "You really hurt my feelings this is just a test to prove ourselves. Which I think we both did but some people just crave the thrill of battle." Onbn said in a soft but angry voice.
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:21 pm

Koga fell screaming in pain as he was stabbed in as vain and started gushing blood everywhere. The sand medical ninja came and took Koga to the hospital.
"You pass. Keep going to the next class."
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