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Post by Narrashi Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:00 pm

Name:Seishun furu pawaa! - Springtime of Youth Full Power!
Type:Attack,Short range(0-5m)
Rank:B
Description:Seishun furu pawaa is a Taijutsu technique . Narrashi will go all out against his opponent by first launching them into the air. He will then kick them and follow up with another powerfull kick, which will send them crashing back into the earth below.

Rasengan - Spiral Sphere
Rank: A
Description:Rasengan was a ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. Like Kage Bunshin, Naruto would adopt the technique as a signature move and make it all his own. The technique is unlike other jutsu in that it does not require any handseals, it just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact.

Thus the technique was pure shape manipulation of chakra, unlike most elemental techniques which are shape and nature manipulation. Hatake Kakashi stated the technique was unfinished for this reason, as the Fourth Hokage did not get a chance to add some form of nature manipulation to it and it was even unclear whether it is even possible for an elemental nature to be added. Naruto dedicated himself to this task though, in the hopes of fusing his Wind elemental nature with the Rasengan's shape manipulation. He eventually succeeded after long and hard training, which took advantage of Kage Bunshin's memory absorption capabilities. He was able to finish the jutsu in the span of a few weeks what would have taken a normal ninja numerous years. The new Wind Element version was thus named .

Name:Rasen Shuriken - Spiral Shuriken
Type:Attack,Short range(0-5m)
Rank:A
Description:Fuuton • Rasen Shuriken is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. Rasen Shuriken was developed by Uzumaki Naruto out of the original Fuuton • Rasengan. This spiraling Wind attack has only been seen in a half completed state. But even in this incomplete form, it has wrought massive destruction. With the aid of clones Naruto will form Rasengan and add the Wind Element. Though called "shuriken" the attack is not thrown. The trick name along with the aid of clones who act as a feint allow Naruto to get in close and strike his opponent. The attack itself can only be maintained in his hands for a few seconds time.

Rasen Shuriken is formed by enumerable miniscule small blades which slice into every cell of his target, severing the chakra circulatory channels connecting all the vital points on the body. Once it connects the highly dangerous attack will envelop the target in a massive sphere of destruction. The attack hits the opponent in such a way that it is even beyond the abilities of the Sharingan to copy. Due to its channel severing nature, the result on the body resembles a fast acting poison more than an outright attack.


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Post by Paksennarion Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:04 pm

Some of these jutsu are already in the scroll section. Please look there first before making customs.
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Post by Narrashi Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:19 pm

Ok fixed
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Post by Paksennarion Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:23 pm

The first one should probably be a B rank. The last one an A I think.

What's everyone else's opinions?
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Post by Narrashi Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:26 pm

Ok i did as you said Paks.Pls let it be like Paks said ^^
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Post by Kiza Byarigan Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:12 pm

Since those we the only problems and they were fixed, I would say approved.
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Post by Paksennarion Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:06 pm

Second approval.
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Post by Narrashi Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:06 pm

Thanks
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